Phil 103 -- The Committed Life

[ Spring 2013 ] 


Paper on Machiavelli 


Details4-5 pp. length (typed, in 1.5 spacing*); value: 25 points. Submit in hard copy, not as an email attachment (unless previously agreed). Use in-text citations to refer to Machiavelli's text (ed. Wootton) and to Abramson (e.g., Abramson, p. xx; Wootton, p. xx), etc.  /  * To get 1.5 spacing, select the text, hold down Ctrl and type ‘5’.

Due: Tuesday, Mar. 19, 2013  /  1:00 p.m.  Deliver papers to my mailbox in CH 300. 

Topic:  How does Machiavelli's work The Prince compare with the political views that we have previously encountered?  How does his approach to politics differ from these?  What kinds of assumptions does he make about human nature and the world (and, is he right), and how does he reconceive the ancient and medieval relation between politics and ethics? How would philosophers like Plato, Aristotle, and Augustine respond to Machiavelli, and how might he defend himself against their criticisms in turn?  Does he reject their views entirely, and they his, or do they differ only in some respects or degree?  It is possible to avoid Machiavelli's conclusions about politics? (Consider your own response, and how you might argue for or against him.) That is, is Machiavelli's political realism unavoidable, and is political morality possible?

Be sure to make explicit use of both Machiavelli's text and Abramson's discussion, using citations and quotations from each source. When you insert a quotation, be sure to explain it and put it into context, and don't simply let it do the work for you.  Remember, too, that you can quote passages that you disagree with, not only ones that support your views.

Assuming that you've read all the materials carefully and have been to class, begin by reviewing your notes and the readings with the assignment prompt in mind, marking passages that may be useful to cite or quote in your paper. Then, brainstorm and jot down different ideas and approaches that you might take. Next, organize your thoughts into some kind of structure and order (what depends on or follows what, and why). Write an initial introductory paragraph setting out your approach, including the order in which you will address the topics selected, and then begin writing. The most important thing is for you to find some kind of central idea or starting point (i.e., know what you want to say).  Once you have this you can develop it in the context of other ideas, filling in your basic scheme and creating a coherent structure. Every paper will be different in this way, even though all of them should reflect a knowledge of the thinkers  covered, especially Machiavelli.

Write each section or paragraph separately, and don't move on until you are fairly satisfied that you have explained yourself well. When you do turn to the next paragraph, be sure you know why; that is, be ready to explain why the next topic "follows" or comes up in your sequence or development.  At the end of the paper, write a conclusion that both summarizes your main points and suggests further discussion topics that you've not been able to address in the paper. After this, go back and redo the introduction based on what you've actually done in the paper.  

Write at least two drafts of the paper, leaving a day or two in between so that you can get some distance toward your work and approach it more critically.  (You'll be surprised if you've never done this.)  Then revise as needed, making your ideas more clear, your arguments stronger, and your expressions better. At the very end, do a spelling and grammar check, and read through the paper from beginning to end, making sure that it is your best work. Throughout the process, remember that good writing is difficult and takes both time and practice.

Also consult the "Paper Writing Advice" and "Style Sheet" documents in Blackboard, under Assignments.